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Waiting For the Dream

There is a beach of pure white sand An island in a far-off strand where I shall walk with happy feet Where tall palms overhead will meet Where green and scarlet birds will fly Beneath a golden tropic sky There is a spring, whose waters flow Along a creek bed cold as snow That I shall drink with eagerness With taste of mint and watercress To quench a thirst that I have known Within my very flesh and bone I have a world in which to roam A tree a thousand miles from home That I have never even seen And yet I know it's branches green Will give me shade some happy day Beside a lake long miles away My dream foretells my longing's fate And so I'll bide my time and wait

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/9/2011 6:26:00 AM
This poem is like a sweet melody!
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Date: 1/8/2010 1:57:00 PM
That longing seems t be built into every spirit which is so sublime. You have accessed and shown it very well in this lovely poem. -Robert Thank you for your very kind comments. I do appreciate them. ....let me know if your hubby needs another hand in the garage.
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Date: 1/7/2010 12:52:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! TAH
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Date: 1/6/2010 6:34:00 PM
Calming and soothing poetry from u Carrie and such an enjoyable read.. this scene is pure delight for a beach baby like me... enjoyed very much... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/6/2010 10:35:00 AM
Extremely beautiful and lovely. Very vivid in describing the beautiful surroundings of your dream place. I recollect these lines which I read somewhere 'If you can dream it you can achieve it'. Thanks for a beautiful poem and for your precious comments on my poem Flow River Flow. Hope you would like my Boatman’s song. With best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:50:00 PM
Sublime, excellent use of words...Raul
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:24:00 PM
heavenly. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:13:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Carrie! An awesome place indeed. And perhaps the dream has an underlying meaning as well. Thanks for sharing. Love and happiness, Caroline.
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:12:00 PM
This is very very good, Carrie. wow, it just makes you feel so peaceful, and I hope it gets to become your reality!! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:10:00 PM
Wow...Your poem is beautiful and makes me want to go to those places...Marty
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