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Waiting For Superman

Gazing at the evening sky, as though watching a soap opera, her bosoms partially bare, she waits for a superman to help her on her two feet again. She has danced with strangers for long, taking glasses of wine with them; men who only want to know her in bed, rather than know her name, where she lives, what she loves, her history. Gazing at the stars glowing in silence, she waits for a special man to save her from her own destruction. She waits for superman. (NB: This piece was published in Leaves of Ink.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/8/2016 10:43:00 PM
TEDDY, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "It's Over." always & forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/9/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda, for your kind applause!! *^_^* <3 Your blogs rock!! ****
Date: 7/30/2015 1:03:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem Teddy! This is so real n deep my friend, wish the superman soon arrives!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2015 9:38:00 AM
Hahahaha... I wish Superman arrives too Dr. Upma. Thank you for your applause! ;-)
Date: 7/28/2015 9:09:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/29/2015 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^*
Date: 7/28/2015 1:23:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held This Year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very old contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "EXCUSE ME" if you'd like or have the time. --I'm glad to be back on the wild side of Poetry Soup hosting, new contest. Yours Truly!!! *LINDA*
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/29/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thank you for your applause Linda! The contest was fun! ^_^
Date: 3/7/2015 8:11:00 PM
she's gonna have a long wait. But who knows, she might get lucky!! A very perceptive poem, Teddy. I enjoyed the read.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2015 4:15:00 AM
Lol. I always love your comments Andrea! Thank you for enjoying my read! ^_^
Date: 3/7/2015 8:49:00 AM
A teddy i love this one my bro show her to me and i will try to pull a superman or as nairobian call him 'makmende' the nairobi version of a superhero****blessings
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2015 4:13:00 AM
Hahahaha..... Wacha Makmende akuje... Thanks for your comment bro! ;-)
Date: 3/6/2015 2:27:00 AM
I so much enjoyed this wtite. #7
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/7/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Njeri! ^_^ I was inspired by Daughtry's song, with the same title.

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