Waiting For Spring Haiku

Sullen lead tendrils
embrace emeralds brought by
periwinkle skies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 16, 2010 at 5:00 PM
Love the idea of "perwinkle skies." Interesting perspective for the reader to reflect on. Nice use of imagery. Keep that pen flowing. Thank you for stopping by to comment. Karen
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January 29, 2010 at 4:19 PM
Beautiful Haiku that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 26, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Gerard. Love, Carol
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January 26, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Brilliant images of spring emerging, Gerard! Best of luck in Carol's contest with this great entry. Love, carolyn
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