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Waiting For Spring

Dusk freezes where tinsels of gold Spill through the air as morns unfold... Of late, in opal sheen, dawn glides As hoar-frost whirls through the hillsides, Revealing leaves that plunge nearby , Like graying pearls beneath the sky Draped by winter in full upswing-- Till blossoms peep to welcome spring When rosy hues climb on my gate To bear garlands, yet I must wait Until the sun shines down to warm Each perfumed spray... no flakes must harm: Oval -shaped leaves unfurling now Would soon hang heavy on the bough, Quite charming they are, stirring there Enough to adorn many ladies' hair ... Their glossed petals of bridal white And dewy pink of such delight; Enhances May's advent, how sheer This floral birth... tenderly dear! For Laura Loo: Any Couplet Written In Oct-Nov 2017 Originally written 10/14/2017 Resubmitted 11/27/2017

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Date: 12/3/2017 3:36:00 PM
Imagery galore in this gem, Nette. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/2/2017 3:25:00 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely, early spring bouquet, Nette. Congratulations on your win! :) Bartholomew
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Date: 12/1/2017 10:50:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Nette , congratulations on a well deserved win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/1/2017 2:24:00 PM
A lovely jewel Nette! Congratulations on your high placement! : )
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Date: 12/1/2017 4:40:00 AM
you make me crave March already and winter barely started! lol such beautiful imagery and lovely rhythm and rhyme. good poem sweet Nette :) thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 10/15/2017 7:59:00 PM
This is so beautiful but oh my, autumn isn't even over yet!!! lets not rush things!!!!!!!! before spring comes those huge snowstorms!!! :) :)
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Date: 10/14/2017 9:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem... long live Autumn.
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Date: 10/14/2017 1:33:00 AM
This is such a fabulous and wondrous write my friend! I just love the way you slid in there an opal sheen, and hoar-frost, what a specific feel and description! I surely enjoyed reading your illustrious piece this morning! It is rather a glorious poem, full of hope for a warmer season, me, I'm waiting for Autumn, it's here but the weather doesn't seem to know it yet! I hate the higher temps, especially in my season, Autumn! What a special write you have written Nette, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/13/2017 6:27:00 PM
Very well written rhyme--a scenic imagery of the season awaiting the arrival of Spring--best for a win, nette!
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Date: 10/13/2017 2:53:00 PM
Right you are! Is there a way to extend autumn, have a month of winter, then get right into a longer spring? I am drawn to your captive language , so eloquent!
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