Waiting For My Girlfriend

My girlfriend decides what to wear
The dress she wore had a tear
She ran up the stairs
To change into something ordinaire
For the country fair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Berggren Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Hope she found the right dress to wear. The county fair can be fun.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Yes she did and the country fairis a lot of fun. Have a nice day. My friend.
Behm Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Great imagery. I felt like I was there. :) Kurt
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Kurt.
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