Waiting and Knowing

Looking at the clock; waiting for time to fly
We watch the world go by; flying so high

We spin all around; waiting for time to heal
Knowing what we feel; less of more is real

In our world of colors; waiting for more control
Knowing of our role; we fight for our soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 9:09 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 10, 2016 at 2:31 AM
well done, Ashley. LindA
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July 5, 2015 at 1:55 AM
AShley:) Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT
Uche O. Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 12:10 PM
Haaaaa! Touching, I like the flow and the real message of time, as we wait...
Abraham Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Thank you :)
Brown Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 7:13 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Ashley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Abraham Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Thank you so much :)
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September 15, 2012 at 9:12 AM
Yes it's true, well written Have a lovely weekend. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Abraham Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:15 AM
Thank you :)
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