Waiting

He never did come but his sweet moments always drived me crazy.

My madness became so wild with a desire to meet him yesterday and today destroyed my peace forever.

I heard someone at the door and thought that god have listened my prayer.

And when opened I see that the harsh wind ridiculed and left me unsaid...
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Hicks Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Welcome to PS, Randhir ... hope you enjoy yourself on the site with this wonderful community of poets. Not a bad first poem ... suggestive of a longer story and dashed hopes.
Kaur Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Thanks Hicks. Yeah next time better for sure dear..
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 7:19 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Randhir. :)
Kaur Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:30 AM
Thanks Moon for your appreciation.
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May 12, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Randhir, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Kaur Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Hey thank you so much..hoping to enjoy your company dear Linda. I will surely have a look. Very soon.
Dalei Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Randhir, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) with love
Kaur Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Thank you Manmath for your kind wishes..
A  Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 8:30 AM
PS, just a little note, Rabdhir, this is not a ballad. You might want to list this under the I DON'T KNOW FORM. SO WILD..... SKAT
Kaur Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Thank you SKAT for warm welcome and love..Nice to meet you poetess. Actually this simply a melancholy poem but my screen is not allowing to show more categories so I chose one which is not at all valid category... sorry for it dear..ping you very soon.. Regards_Kaur_
A  Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Randhir,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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