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Waiting

Waiting for a bus taxi or train Waiting to get to your destiny Waiting I now am in vane Waiting feels like an eternity Waiting Ill be here till dooms day Waiting on the move of a house Waiting from September to may Waiting like a lover or spouse Waiting on a repair call out Waiting more than just once Waiting I am hanging about Waiting for some response Waiting in another endless cue Waiting now a days seems rife Waiting but what else is new Waiting is the story of my life this not really my best effort just floating around at time probably work on at later date im sure some can relate to this to written may 2012

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Date: 5/1/2013 1:07:00 PM
As for not your best effort, I thought it was awesomely penned. Thanks for sharing this kind of work. I enjoyed reading Dave. Miss yah! Always, Laura
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