Waiting

Waiting for a bus taxi or train
Waiting to get to your destiny
Waiting I now am in vane
Waiting feels like an eternity

Waiting Ill be here till dooms day
Waiting on the move of a house
Waiting from September to may
Waiting like a lover or spouse

Waiting on a repair call out
Waiting more than just once
Waiting I am hanging about
Waiting for some response

Waiting in another endless cue
Waiting now a days seems rife
Waiting but what else is new
Waiting is the story of my life


this not  really my best effort just floating around at time
probably work on at later date

im sure some can relate to this to

written may 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 1, 2013 at 1:07 PM
As for not your best effort, I thought it was awesomely penned. Thanks for sharing this kind of work. I enjoyed reading Dave. Miss yah! Always, Laura
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