Waiting

i waited for your love to come a chosen life the only one you came and stayed a little while and on my face you put a smile i waited for loves question asked a challenge met without a task you waited patiently for me of course i answered yes with glee we married on that special day i waited for the chance to say oh yes i take you for my own we waited for our happy home so many years have come and gone and now my love you have moved on i sit here waiting once again with all my heart my love i send...

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/15/2013 3:33:00 PM

Beautiful poem. I haven't read any of your work for a while. But I love this poem. It's like a memorial to a love who has passed on to the other side. So well written. I see why I put you on my favorite poet list.

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 9/16/2013 10:35:00 AM

Thank you Jon, yes it has been a great while since I have had the time to write again. I am trying. You are so kind and I am happy you enjoy reading some of my work. Take care and your so sweet and king with your remarks. Thank you again..As ALways, Shar

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/16/2013 4:59:00 AM

yes I see you placed in a contest with this one and I can see why xx

Willie Wright

Date: 8/8/2012 4:15:00 PM

You should be very proud of this poem. Lot's of feeling. These words were determined to be written down.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/2/2012 12:35:00 AM

shoron... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 7:26:00 PM

Hello PD soooo good to hear from you again...Thank you I am just having some fun. Still working and writing between time... Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 2:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Sharon. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 7:28:00 PM

Hello Carol, hope all is well with you..Thank you for stopping by.........Smiles

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2012 9:23:00 AM

congrats Sharon on a brilliant write and win luv.. hope u have been well.. I am dealing with a variety of health issues these days but tryung my best to write on PS.. and stay in contact with my lovely friends luv..

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 7:26:00 PM

Thank you honey for your read and you always kind remarks.... Smiles

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2012 7:53:00 AM

adorable kind of waiting, sharon.. congrats on your superb win.. :) huggs!

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 7:29:00 PM

Hello Nette, Thank you for reading me hon and always leaving such nice comments.....Lov, Shar

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/31/2012 6:28:00 AM

"With all my heart my love I send"...Wonderful piece,Sharon...I love this Line...Congratulations on your well deserved win...XOXO...

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 7:27:00 PM

Hello Olusequn, Thank you for reading me and for leaving such a nice comment....Smiles

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/31/2012 1:41:00 AM

Congratulations Sharon, I hope the waiting ends soon xx

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 7/31/2012 12:38:00 AM

Congrats on your big win Sharon...much enjoyed your poem.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/30/2012 6:44:00 PM

Heartbreaking, Sharon...congrats on your wonderful win with this poignant write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May

Date: 7/30/2012 3:31:00 PM

congrats on your win Sharon

David Williams

Date: 7/30/2012 2:50:00 PM

Sharon congrats on your win, sad tale..David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2012 4:02:00 PM

A touch of sadness amidst once a happy time..Enjoyed reading this eve..If for the contest, reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 7/27/2012 3:22:00 PM

Hello Sara, Thank you for your lovely comments, yes my love has gone now but I know I will see him again someday. Hope you are well and having a beautiful Summer. Love, Shar