Sharon Ruebel Poet Rhyme

Waiting

i waited for your love to come
a chosen life the only one

you came and stayed a little while
and on my face you put a smile

i waited for loves question asked
a challenge met without a task

you waited patiently for me
of course i answered yes with glee

we married on that special day
i waited for the chance to say

oh yes i take you for my own
we waited for our happy home

so many years have come and gone
and now my love you have moved on

i sit here waiting once again
with all my heart my love i send...

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Jon A Cavanaugh September 15, 2013 at 3:33 PM Beautiful poem. I haven't read any of your work for a while. But I love this poem. It's like a memorial to a love who has passed on to the other side. So well written. I see why I put you on my favorite poet list. Sharon Ruebel September 16, 2013 at 10:35 AM Thank you Jon, yes it has been a great while since I have had the time to write again. I am trying. You are so kind and I am happy you enjoy reading some of my work. Take care and your so sweet and king with your remarks. Thank you again..As ALways, Shar

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 16, 2013 at 4:59 AM yes I see you placed in a contest with this one and I can see why xx

Willie Wright August 8, 2012 at 4:15 PM You should be very proud of this poem. Lot's of feeling. These words were determined to be written down.

Poet Destroyer A August 2, 2012 at 12:35 AM shoron... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD Sharon Ruebel August 3, 2012 at 7:26 PM Hello PD soooo good to hear from you again...Thank you I am just having some fun. Still working and writing between time... Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 2:05 PM Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Sharon. Love, Carol Sharon Ruebel August 3, 2012 at 7:28 PM Hello Carol, hope all is well with you..Thank you for stopping by.........Smiles

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2012 at 9:23 AM congrats Sharon on a brilliant write and win luv.. hope u have been well.. I am dealing with a variety of health issues these days but tryung my best to write on PS.. and stay in contact with my lovely friends luv.. Sharon Ruebel August 3, 2012 at 7:26 PM Thank you honey for your read and you always kind remarks.... Smiles

Nette Onclaud July 31, 2012 at 7:53 AM adorable kind of waiting, sharon.. congrats on your superb win.. :) huggs! Sharon Ruebel August 3, 2012 at 7:29 PM Hello Nette, Thank you for reading me hon and always leaving such nice comments.....Lov, Shar

Olusegun Arowolo July 31, 2012 at 6:28 AM "With all my heart my love I send"...Wonderful piece,Sharon...I love this Line...Congratulations on your well deserved win...XOXO... Sharon Ruebel August 3, 2012 at 7:27 PM Hello Olusequn, Thank you for reading me and for leaving such a nice comment....Smiles

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl July 31, 2012 at 1:41 AM Congratulations Sharon, I hope the waiting ends soon xx

Jonas L. Rozario July 31, 2012 at 12:38 AM Congrats on your big win Sharon...much enjoyed your poem.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 30, 2012 at 6:44 PM Heartbreaking, Sharon...congrats on your wonderful win with this poignant write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May July 30, 2012 at 3:31 PM congrats on your win Sharon

David Williams July 30, 2012 at 2:50 PM Sharon congrats on your win, sad tale..David

Sara Kendrick July 26, 2012 at 4:02 PM A touch of sadness amidst once a happy time..Enjoyed reading this eve..If for the contest, reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest..Sara Sharon Ruebel July 27, 2012 at 3:22 PM Hello Sara, Thank you for your lovely comments, yes my love has gone now but I know I will see him again someday. Hope you are well and having a beautiful Summer. Love, Shar