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she is screaming he is laughing baby is crying feelings are slipping I am watching the hand is slapping she is falling he's still laughing I'm now crying she is rising he is pushing I am fleeing baby still crying she is bleeding he is kicking I am flying she's not breating he is seeing he's now crying I'm now calling

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Date: 3/24/2016 8:58:00 PM
dylan baker, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA...
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Date: 7/27/2015 3:40:00 PM
DYLAN, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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