Paghunda Zahid Poet Rhyme

Waiting

How fabulous it would be
When you would walk gracefully to me

My eyes ___ on your fantastic sight, 
Forget to blink and would open quite wide

Heart wound skip some beats and then cease
for he eventually would find some peace 

That calm, that stillness, those unheard words, 
Will sooth the soul like the spell of a wizard 

To you, each cell of myself would surrender __
Like a rose to a butterfly__ on your one gentle whisper 

With your elegant touch my cocoon will shatter 
Allowing me to embrace your world full of adventures

Only with you O' savior, O' my jovial Destiny 
O' kind Death, I shall walk towards eternity

Paghunda Zahid 
12-08-2020

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Paghunda Zahid March 20, 2021 at 12:25 PM Typo fixed... Had written people instead of peace... Like how can I, lol

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 20, 2021 at 3:28 AM Very compelling poem, Paghunda! The theme of love conquering death is always worth soulfully expressing. Outstanding poem! Love and more love always. Paghunda Zahid March 20, 2021 at 12:26 PM Thanks Freddie

Jesse Zerlaut February 4, 2021 at 9:27 AM That was amazingly worded. I really like this poem, Paghunda! Paghunda Zahid February 5, 2021 at 10:24 AM Thanks Jesse

Peter Dome December 24, 2020 at 1:44 AM Beautiful and inspiring. Well done. Paghunda Zahid February 5, 2021 at 10:24 AM Thank you

Darlene De Beaulieu December 22, 2020 at 4:07 PM Hello Paghunda, this is a beautiful poem you created. The only words that comes to mind is Amen. Merry Christmas. Happy new Year. Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 23, 2020 at 10:22 AM You can call me by my first name Darlene /De Beaulieu is my last name. I am a widow. Darlene De Beaulieu December 23, 2020 at 10:06 AM Hello Paghunda, you are welcome my friend. Happy New Year to you. I want this year to be blessed one for you as well. I agree no wars. People should live in peace. Yes also no terrorism either. Just peace wuld be nice to have. Enjoy your day my friend. Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2020 at 9:11 AM Thank you Deaulien. Happy new year to you as well. May this be the blessed one, without covid, without any kind of terrorism or war. Just peace and prosperity

Jennifer Proxenos December 13, 2020 at 5:37 AM I told you you write so beautifully Paghunda, and so uniquely - this one is no exception with your rife and vivid imagination. Be blessed my friend, Hugs, Jennifer. Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2020 at 9:10 AM So nice of you. I am trying to write, but I am not a natural poet. Just trying. Thanks a lot Jennifer!

Paul Callus December 12, 2020 at 7:13 AM Looking at this expressive poem through metaphoric eyes...beautiful, Paghunda! Regards // paul Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2020 at 9:09 AM Thank you

Besma Riabi Dziri December 11, 2020 at 5:17 AM A world of mistery that defies our perception.. a world of wonder that transcends the dimensions of mind.. a world, even words fail to fathom and fashion its core.. how wouldn't a soul succumb to such powerful forces and alluring journey to the unknown! So beautiful and so deep is your poetic rendition of a soul longing to "walk towards eternity"! Blessings to you dear poetess, Paghunda. Best regards. Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2020 at 9:08 AM Thanks Besma for stopping by. Stay blessed!