Waiting

How fabulous it would be
When you would walk gracefully to me

My eyes ___ on your fantastic sight, 
Forget to blink and would open quite wide

Heart wound skip some beats and then cease
for he eventually would find some peace 

That calm, that stillness, those unheard words, 
Will sooth the soul like the spell of a wizard 

To you, each cell of myself would surrender __
Like a rose to a butterfly__ on your one gentle whisper 

With your elegant touch my cocoon will shatter 
Allowing me to embrace your world full of adventures

Only with you O' savior, O' my jovial Destiny 
O' kind Death, I shall walk towards eternity

Paghunda Zahid 
12-08-2020

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Date: 3/20/2021 12:25:00 PM
Typo fixed... Had written people instead of peace... Like how can I, lol
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Date: 3/20/2021 3:28:00 AM
Very compelling poem, Paghunda! The theme of love conquering death is always worth soulfully expressing. Outstanding poem! Love and more love always.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 3/20/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thanks Freddie
Date: 2/4/2021 9:27:00 AM
That was amazingly worded. I really like this poem, Paghunda!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/5/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Jesse
Date: 12/24/2020 1:44:00 AM
Beautiful and inspiring. Well done.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/5/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/22/2020 4:07:00 PM
Hello Paghunda, this is a beautiful poem you created. The only words that comes to mind is Amen. Merry Christmas. Happy new Year. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/23/2020 10:22:00 AM
You can call me by my first name Darlene /De Beaulieu is my last name. I am a widow.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/23/2020 10:06:00 AM
Hello Paghunda, you are welcome my friend. Happy New Year to you. I want this year to be blessed one for you as well. I agree no wars. People should live in peace. Yes also no terrorism either. Just peace wuld be nice to have. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2020 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Deaulien. Happy new year to you as well. May this be the blessed one, without covid, without any kind of terrorism or war. Just peace and prosperity
Date: 12/13/2020 5:37:00 AM
I told you you write so beautifully Paghunda, and so uniquely - this one is no exception with your rife and vivid imagination. Be blessed my friend, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2020 9:10:00 AM
So nice of you. I am trying to write, but I am not a natural poet. Just trying. Thanks a lot Jennifer!
Date: 12/12/2020 7:13:00 AM
Looking at this expressive poem through metaphoric eyes...beautiful, Paghunda! Regards // paul
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/11/2020 5:17:00 AM
A world of mistery that defies our perception.. a world of wonder that transcends the dimensions of mind.. a world, even words fail to fathom and fashion its core.. how wouldn't a soul succumb to such powerful forces and alluring journey to the unknown! So beautiful and so deep is your poetic rendition of a soul longing to "walk towards eternity"! Blessings to you dear poetess, Paghunda. Best regards.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2020 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Besma for stopping by. Stay blessed!
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