Waiting

You bring me up You bring me down and then you give me the run around You know I'am interested in you But still you don't want to be true You pull me here You pull me there And all I want to be is fair Is this atraction right or wrong? Don't make me wait for too long Cause you are the apple of my eye Come on let's give love a try 12/15/19 #6

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/19/2018 7:18:00 AM

Interesting lines penned for picture number 6. I believe he might have waited a little too long though. Top of the list work. congrats. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/16/2018 3:41:00 PM

Sometimes we just can't read our partners, Rochelle. I wouldn't wait too long for him to come around. The feeling of love should be shared by two. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn