Rochelle Jones Poet Tail-rhyme

Waiting

You bring me up
                  You bring me down
             and then you give me the run around

             You know I'am interested in you
             But still you don't want to be true

                     You pull me here
                     You pull me there
              And all I want to be is fair

              Is this atraction right or wrong?
              Don't make me wait for too long
              Cause you are the apple of my eye
              Come on let's give love a try


12/15/19  #6

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Sara Kendrick December 19, 2018 at 7:18 AM Interesting lines penned for picture number 6. I believe he might have waited a little too long though. Top of the list work. congrats. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire December 16, 2018 at 3:41 PM Sometimes we just can't read our partners, Rochelle. I wouldn't wait too long for him to come around. The feeling of love should be shared by two. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn