Wait List

The news slowly wafted past her ears
Not knowing to laugh or show tears
The gut reaction deep in the heart
Only catching drifts as it came apart.

She hoped the news would be good
But only dampened her mood
In spite of the time that went by
Now all she wanted was to cry.

So many ups but lately the down
Wanting to be homeward bound
Another surgery drawing near
Needing to get over hospital fear.


06/06/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/7/2017 2:09:00 PM
- The longer one waits ... one gets sicker - A terrible time to wait - That's the way in Norway too - People die while they wait - Great written and good luck, Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/15/2017 7:00:00 PM
Surgery is on the 21st so it only took 2 weeks from the results to the surgery. That is fast. love phyl
Date: 6/6/2017 4:44:00 PM
I once waited 10 days for blood thinner to clear my body before heart surgery. The wait was more stressful than the surgery. I can relate, Mrs Phyllis.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/15/2017 7:01:00 PM
A week to go and getting stressed over having surgery. Thanks Daniel. love phyl
Date: 6/6/2017 2:36:00 PM
Oh I can relate ...the waiting can be as bad as the surgery itself Phyllis:-( hugs Jan xx
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/15/2017 7:03:00 PM
Getting stressed as surgery is next week. Not looking forward to being tied up for the summer. love phyl
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