Wading Weighting Waiting Room

Wading Weighting Waiting Room

Wading in thoughts, weighting words, 
fearfully here in this waiting room.

There's a compact slightly cracked 
music player by itself on a shelf. 

Someone largely in charge has 
shaped tape over its switches.

So none of us can make it go, 
and silence reigns, or rains in our brains. 

But curiouser and worryouser, 
there is a kinky pink plastic angel. 

Winged bustlet, angling down, slight frown 
ungracing his/her face from shelf space. 

Worse yet, I see he/she's got a twin, 
but blue, no grin, top of a storage bin. 

And a magazine rack mauls the wall,
with a fall magazine mocking spring. 

Who do these voodoo things, 
that shiver-quiver my head strings?

Godot is ever a no-show, but me, 
I'm fearfully here, slowfully waiting. 

			Dan Daniels 
			15-08-21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 12:12 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 22, 2016 at 8:31 PM
HEY DAN :).......... SKAT :)
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November 21, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Hi Dan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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November 21, 2015 at 8:47 PM
Hi Dan, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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November 21, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Dan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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