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Wabi-Sabi

wabi-sabi stains, etched upon our soul
characterise struggles, that make us whole
vanishing ink cognised by inner eye
that with feet on ground, we reach for the sky
reuniting with source, our earth life goal

stepping lightly along the pathless path
each moment in time, a holy sabbath
we relinquish control through surrender
embracing life, like a child in wonder 
fearing no longer, destiny spawned wrath

wheel of time displays, our footprints on sand
then, as now, we walk with God, hand in hand

30-April-2021

(syllabic rhyme)

"Footprints" Old or New for a Prize Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Truly we are never alone Seeker! There are always a dual set of footprints - ours and God's - "hand in hand." Such comforting words. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you.
Alex Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Beautiful Rhyme.
May Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win..
Devonshire Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:38 AM
I love the rhyme form you chose, U.S., and the way you trace our footprints in the sands of life. The last couplet truly touched my heart. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Seeker Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Thanks for gathering us all together by hosting the contest, Carolyn! Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Yes! Let us release our grip, and embrace life, as you say, in wonderment, like a child! ~ Sabbatean
Seeker Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 9:35 AM
So simple, isn’t it?
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:36 AM
To walk with God hand in hand. A lovely thought. Tears wiped away. Just a lovely day.
Seeker Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Thank you for dropping by Kim!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 3:06 AM
An intelligent argument on life.
Seeker Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:12 AM
A way of life ...
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