Vultures Circling

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                                                 vultures circling
                                      over fall's red golden leaves..
                                             suddenly dive lunch

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Carol Sunshine Brown

October 12, 2012 at 11:00 AM

I am so happy to be able to read some of your amazing poetry today Sara. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I will be back another day to read through more of your poetry. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

November 24, 2011 at 12:01 AM

HELLO SARA, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! iI HAVE A FEELING YOU WILL SPEND IT WELL WITH YOUR FAMILY...Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Tim B

November 18, 2011 at 8:29 PM

I would pick your brain as Mrs. Carolyn thought to but as she said, it's best left to the imagination what the vulture's found. But it's a great way to elicit the sense of death that we identify with the season of fall. Bravo.

Judy Ball

November 18, 2011 at 7:55 PM

Very well done Sara. You paint a vivid picture. God Bless, JB

Carolyn Devonshire

November 18, 2011 at 6:04 PM

Nice mystery allowing us to guess what's beneath those leaves, Sara. I appreciate your subtle approach in not saying something crass like "last week's roadkill." I'd prefer to think the vultures saw some mice in the leaves. Thanks for leaving it up to our imaginations! Love, Carolyn