Vulnerability

vulnerability-
whenever disaster strikes
we need each other



* My heart and prayers go out to those in Moore, Oklahoma.

For Black Eyed Susan's contest, '1 Senryu Any Subject'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 5:09 AM
Very compassionate work..That was a tragedy...Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Sara thank you kindly for your comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 9:56 AM
- Amazing poem, Connie ! - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 12:32 PM
Thank you Anne for stopping and reading my Senryu. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 12:09 AM
An outstanding message in this one!
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 4:34 AM
Andrea thank you for your kind comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Sivey Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 8:35 PM
This is a great subject to do for this contest Connie! You have done an excellent job with this poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! What a tremendous write, Great Work!!
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 4:36 AM
Thank you Russell for your kind comment much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
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