Voyage To Land

"Evil ghost phase" passing
Video game blues
Friends not brightest
To be human stirring within
God popping in, out
Weaving plan
Ability to help others
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Delacroix Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Had to read this a couple of times to understand what you are trying to say. My conclusion is that you are expressing the 2 tendencies of a human, selfishness and the ability to live for others, which is quiet true. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Be well! Caroline.
Foulk Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 8:19 AM
this poem moved right along, a very creative piece of work.
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Joshua. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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