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Vow of Pond's Water

Vow of pond’s water
                                           Still air hardly breaks promise
                                                   leaf causes ripple

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Andrea Dietrich

August 24, 2012 at 8:37 PM

Debs is over thinking it down here!!

Bl Devnath

August 25, 2012 at 7:46 AM

My friend, what i do feel, i write. If you show my mistake i will learn from you as a student. Because, learning has no end. As perfection has no level, so i think, i must keep my learning continuous. I always try to read your poems.Thanks, loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

August 24, 2012 at 8:36 PM

this is REALLY good one, BL. One of your best haiku!

Bl Devnath

August 25, 2012 at 7:39 AM

My friend, thanks a lot for enjoying my write. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

August 24, 2012 at 5:09 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..I can see the scene...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bl Devnath

August 24, 2012 at 7:26 PM

Thanks a lot for your comment. Sorry friend, the comment submitted below is for our lovely friend, Debbie Guzzi.

Bl Devnath

August 24, 2012 at 7:23 PM

"Thanks for showing me the right way of haiku. I will try to change the way here of this haiku. Loved always,bl"

Debbie Guzzi

August 24, 2012 at 12:28 PM

You have personified the pond & the air, haiku does not use personification for that is imposing the poets 'judgement' on the scene, give a factual sensory image and let the reader take it where the reader needs, the completion of the verse is in the readers mind's eye. Light & Love

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