Vor Der Abendröte / Before Sunset

Klagen werden laut
Die Sonne verfinstert sich
Kurz vor der Abendröte


Raising sounds of wailing 
The sun grows dark 
Shortly before sunset
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 7:00 AM
Interesting thoughts penned here..The sounds of whatever is wailing made the sun grow dark..Very thought provoking...Sara
Richards Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 11:54 AM
You are so good at these lovely descriptions !! Wailing could mean many things:)!
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Love that first line. For me the wailing must be some kids not wanting to go inside from the dark!!
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