Voodooed By You

You stab at my manufactured beatless heart,
and tear off my tattered burlap textile.
Puncturing the weakened breath from my tight lungs.
To you, I’m just a naked doll’s unsexed part,
while enduring revenge pain for your feigned love.
Taking mock death with a bent smile from the start. 
Your list grows longer, my devotion stays true.
Our creativeness shown like expensive art.
Sharp pins and needles make me feel worthwhile,
from the tight breath puncturing my weakened lungs. 
Us two, hand-in-hand, this world we must depart. 


Contest Name: A New Abracadabra Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsor Name: Emile Pinet
Style: Rhyme (Abracadabra)
Date: April 14, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 7:45 PM
I really like this line "Our creativeness shown like expensive art."
Hubbert Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Thank you Miss Caren. I had never heard of Abracadabra poetry form before today. It was a fun challenge to write this poem today.
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