Vomit......

......dribbles down my chin
a fight against vodka.....
.....i didnt win
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A   Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 6:54 PM
mmm vodka...PD
Rich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 3:18 PM
Hello really enjoyed this poetry today and also will read more... Hope you will enjoy my poem/ story: Criminal-- part2 have a great day
Rich Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Very interesting and meaningful.
A   Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 7:00 AM
wow!!!Daniel,,,been there done that than i grew up,,..lol....nope i have not grwn up yet,,,enjoyed it,,, did you check out my Danny Boy #2 or did you give up,,,if not place nice,,,how about a game of jump rope,,,..lol..Sidney LeeAnn
Culverhouse Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 5:21 PM
gross...please don't share with us! LOL
Conway Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 12:37 PM
That's too funny, I think I've lost that battle a couple of times!~Tirzah~
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