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Volcano

VOLCANO burning red mammoths spear howl dust rock roar cannons scramble mice and men

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Date: 10/24/2014 7:51:00 AM
wow!! what a juxtaposed last line.. :)!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/24/2014 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Olive for your nice comment. Love.:-) RAJAT
Date: 10/24/2014 3:31:00 AM
this one flowed beautiful dear friend
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/24/2014 5:40:00 AM
Thank you liam. Love:-) RAJAT
Date: 10/23/2014 7:34:00 PM
cool last line to this one. I would scramble just as fast as I could!!!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/24/2014 12:30:00 AM
welcome Andrea dear, you're so nice. With my warmest hugs!)))) rajat

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