Volcano

VOLCANO
                                         burning red mammoths
                                spear howl dust rock roar cannons
                                        scramble mice and men
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 7:51 AM
wow!! what a juxtaposed last line.. :)!
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Olive for your nice comment. Love.:-) RAJAT
Mcdaid Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 3:31 AM
this one flowed beautiful dear friend
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 5:40 AM
Thank you liam. Love:-) RAJAT
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 7:34 PM
cool last line to this one. I would scramble just as fast as I could!!!
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 12:30 AM
welcome Andrea dear, you're so nice. With my warmest hugs!)))) rajat
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