Voir Dire Series 6 : On Age

“Counting age is like counting syllables, one needs a pencil. Releasing age, one needs nothing” : Poet
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Age-time exists only in Third Dimension 
our core within each cell imageless, timeless, cosmic
contains no memories, knowledge or wisdom 
these concepts of mind
moon, sun, oceans, tools to use 
happiness, sorrow  
alternative avatars gather fresh

sunrises, sunsets appear, seasons cyclical
for to be gridless no assignments can be imbibed
baby, toddler, teen, adult 
mid-aged, elderly 
every entity to eventual wean
powerful, free, solitary, impartial 

humans have to birth
return to crystal buried 
divinity linked …

assimilate experiences, age lessons learnt
know mistakes were predefined 
to master skills, talents, character 
for optimal tone

roughly at half century
embodied Self hears a call
softening heart, opening mind, explore all
One Love _____ oaks, mountains 
oceans, multiple cultures connected keen 
across dotage, dimensions ~ 

advice to younger self, another, is to
articulate completed chapters, then graft 
vitality understood
 climbing each rung is
advancement to BE

pungency no space in core
regretfulness, bitterness will occasion 
a relearn of curriculum faulted, failed
rapture unqualified is ageless peace found 

numeral similar to race, culture, class
gradual hours, dewy mornings pass by
emphasises mentality, flesh desires 
relinquishing power to stone tracked matrix 
holds no aces sought ____

let departure be timeless
eminent essence bottled
with this lens digits vanish meaningless, float 
away each birthday gathered ~
eat cake even so

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Placed 2nd : Standard Contest 
Sponsor: Silent One
May ‘26
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Richards Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 10:04 AM
You are really excelling at expressing what most feel, but don't always find the words to express. Great write, Ghairo. Another one to add to the example poems at my article on Suzette Prime - thanks.
Daniels Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 6:36 AM
ThkU for pop-in, Dear Su. This one needs an edit. Have a lovely weekend. X.
Hind Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 7:29 PM
deep, very very wise <3
Daniels Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 11:23 PM
Xxxxx !
One Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 2:01 PM
I read a lot of wisdom in your poem.. It is reflective and thought provoking.. You give the reader an insight into your mind. Congratulations on you placement..
Daniels Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 11:25 PM
ThkU for Contest, Silent One. I enjoyed the write & appreciate placement. Have a beautiful day. X.
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