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Wow Jack! This poem struck a chord within me! I am in awe of this fine write! You sure do know how to create a spectacular poem! Great Work!!

Great one..Good job writing this one that is sure to be a winner...Very descriptive of what divorce does to a relationship..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Wow!! Compact but so strong!!

Yes read between the lines my dear a diferent fate comes very clear, a place and time and love & wine which you'd not have had if not for.....Light & Love

ps...u really broadened the expression-"reading between the lines"- in this verse..I would say that is your slam dunk shot with this entry! Very excellent write! gwendoeln

This type of poetry causes my heart to pause and skip beats...as a divorced person once, I cringe at the tho't of others painfully going thru it...(If this is fiction, well, this is darn powerful fiction!) Got your email and the formatting is perfect...I will just follow suit...Thanks for your kindest attention to details and quite possibly a great outcome for a few of us! Yeah. Agreed! Poor choice of candies--chocolate is out! Rock candy is IN! lol,,,Andrea advised me in great depth just as u did, so I feel very prepared to put my best foot forward. Cheers.

Very well written Jack - Luck to you in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

I like the implied distance in between the lines, like how you've grown apart, the holes left inside you. so sad :(