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Void

As I lay here slowly dieing I wonder why no one is crying in my head guilty thoughts break the piece even in death can I get no release? As I lay here almost dead I still cant chase these thoughts from my head I feel the life wasting away and now im sure I wont live to see the next day As I lay here a the angels feet I realize the battle I just lost and away my life will be tossed he speaks in a voice full of poison and so cruel and I realize now, that I’ve been a fool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/16/2009 6:13:00 AM
I love this poem, it speaks to me in a way. Also thank you for commenting on my poetry. Trisha
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Date: 10/10/2009 6:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jonathan. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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