Void

As I lay here
slowly dieing
I wonder why
no one is crying
in my head
guilty thoughts break the piece
even in death
can I get no release?
As I lay here
almost dead
I still cant chase
these thoughts from my head
I feel the life
wasting away
and now im sure
I wont live to see the next day
As I lay here
a the angels feet
I realize the battle I just lost
and away my life will be tossed
he speaks in a voice
full of poison and so cruel
and I realize now, that I’ve been a fool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 16, 2009 at 6:13 AM
I love this poem, it speaks to me in a way. Also thank you for commenting on my poetry. Trisha
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October 10, 2009 at 6:57 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jonathan. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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