Voices Whispering In the Night

Voices whispering in the night, convincing those would be fools. Better a man should lose his sight, than trade love for gold and jewels. The night is full of broken dreams, pieces scattered on the ground. for a life is more than it seems, when love is the treasure found. The things at first that we will see, from behind the darkened skies. Will be the ones that set us free, with the truth instead of lies. For those whom in true love believe, will find their hearts desire. That which the faithful will receive, there is no gift that's higher. The voices whispering in the night, convincing those would be fools. Better a man should lose his sight, than trade love for gold and jewels. than trade love for gold and jewels.
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Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:20 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Meru :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Groen Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 11:53 PM
Thanks so much, I appreciate it...Meru
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 11:01 PM
Enjoyed reading this nicely done write , Meru. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Groen Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 11:54 PM
Your kind critique is so appreciated, thank you!
One Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Meru this poem has great flow and rhyme and a very important message .. I would never trade love for gold and jewels.. Great poetry.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Groen Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Thank you, Silent One, you have been an inspiration, and I really appreciate it, Meru
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