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Vocal rumblings as you sleep and dream,
Only a fool would believe you’re dreaming of me~
Could it be your sweet reverie is a unconscious plea
Aimed at my heart like an arrow shot?
Be mine again I whisper to you,
Under the chaos of us I pledge to be true,
Love me again I plead on this night of insight
As I remember the vows we spoke long ago,
Remember we said unto death ~
Your life insurance is up-to-date, 
           yes, I checked to make sure!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 3:25 PM
well written acrostic but that ending was a surprise. Well done! :-)
Achara Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 3:50 PM
Thank you. I watch too much true crime.
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 1:56 PM
Ha. Loved that ending, Chetta
Achara Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Thank you.
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