Ken Rone Poet Rhyme

Vivianne

Vivianne,   Dame du Lac,
  Valley Girl? Hardly not.              ~
    Voiced to some as                Nimue,
      Valiant knights              in her queue,
        Vespers   on             which she’d come, 
          Viewed as               Lancelot’s mum;
            Vestal              was she. Maiden of yore.
                ~              ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Submitted 5/6/21 1
contest: "Pleiades 'V' Contest"
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Result:  DSQ because a personal name was used in the title.

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Jennifer Proxenos May 30, 2021 at 12:46 PM Great creativity once again - has this poem anything to do with the knights of the round table - sorry this delightful write did not rate high in the contest. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Ken Rone May 30, 2021 at 3:12 PM Dear Jennifer- What a surprise to see you chime in. Thanks for the read. Yes on the theme is midevil, Kights OTRT, etc.

Joseph May May 17, 2021 at 7:40 PM Very nicely done Ken... Ken Rone May 18, 2021 at 7:04 AM Thank you Joseph. It is a delight that you wrote in. I appreciate your comment! - Ken

Heidi Sands May 17, 2021 at 1:43 PM This is a great one Ken. Nice to see this creative poem today :) Ken Rone May 17, 2021 at 1:56 PM i wonder were we reading each other at the same time today...? Thanks to you for your contribution to MY morning. - Ken

Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2021 at 10:44 PM Dang, I wish you had won this contest. I think you did it really well. (cool way you shaped it!) Ken Rone May 13, 2021 at 7:18 AM Easy come, easy go. Next time I guess. Thanks Andrea.

Mystic Rose Rose May 12, 2021 at 11:23 AM This is so well done, one of the best I've seen for the contest. Gl :) Ken Rone May 12, 2021 at 11:45 AM Such a kind reply rose. Thank you very much. Your compliments are always highly regarded.

Paul Callus May 6, 2021 at 11:53 AM If I remember rightly, Dame du Lac was associated with King Arthur, thus I base your delightful poem on that premise. ~ Regards // paul Ken Rone May 6, 2021 at 12:42 PM Bingo. Good recollection Thanks.