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Vivianne

Vivianne, Dame du Lac, Valley Girl? Hardly not. ~ Voiced to some as Nimue, Valiant knights in her queue, Vespers on which she’d come, Viewed as Lancelot’s mum; Vestal was she. Maiden of yore. ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Submitted 5/6/21 1 contest: "Pleiades 'V' Contest" Sponsor: Kim Merryman Result: DSQ because a personal name was used in the title.

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Date: 5/30/2021 12:46:00 PM
Great creativity once again - has this poem anything to do with the knights of the round table - sorry this delightful write did not rate high in the contest. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/30/2021 3:12:00 PM
Dear Jennifer- What a surprise to see you chime in. Thanks for the read. Yes on the theme is midevil, Kights OTRT, etc.
Date: 5/17/2021 7:40:00 PM
Very nicely done Ken...
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/18/2021 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. It is a delight that you wrote in. I appreciate your comment! - Ken
Date: 5/17/2021 1:43:00 PM
This is a great one Ken. Nice to see this creative poem today :)
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/17/2021 1:56:00 PM
i wonder were we reading each other at the same time today...? Thanks to you for your contribution to MY morning. - Ken
Date: 5/12/2021 10:44:00 PM
Dang, I wish you had won this contest. I think you did it really well. (cool way you shaped it!)
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/13/2021 7:18:00 AM
Easy come, easy go. Next time I guess. Thanks Andrea.
Date: 5/12/2021 11:23:00 AM
This is so well done, one of the best I've seen for the contest. Gl :)
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/12/2021 11:45:00 AM
Such a kind reply rose. Thank you very much. Your compliments are always highly regarded.
Date: 5/6/2021 11:53:00 AM
If I remember rightly, Dame du Lac was associated with King Arthur, thus I base your delightful poem on that premise. ~ Regards // paul
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/6/2021 12:42:00 PM
Bingo. Good recollection Thanks.

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