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Vitamin L

Boosted immunity is an aim for us all
          Like most, I have a rattling compartment 
            Where selection of supplements offer
            Ongoing trip, ship of health embarked 

            My eight year old angel of exuberance 
             Sidles beside me for her citrus share
           When she hears vitamin bottles tinkling
            Chasing crisp vitamin C's sparkling flair

          Sherbert fizz raphsody rests on her palm
          Envelope of appreciation wraps me neatly
" There's lots of of Vitamin L for you," impromptu joke
        " Vitamin Love" instant grin returns sweetly



         10th August 2020

         Submitted in: Any Form, Any Theme 20

         Sponsor: Brian Strand

Copyright © Sigrid Ermine | Year Posted 2020

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Clifford Villalon Date: 1/15/2023 4:13:00 PM Happy New Year! Login to Reply

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/12/2020 8:44:00 AM congrats on your win with this Vitamin of Love. Login to Reply Sigrid Ermine Date: 8/12/2020 3:04:00 PM Thank you, Jeanne. I feel there were far more worthy entries, am beginning to understand Brian's preferences.

Carol Mitra Date: 8/12/2020 7:05:00 AM So heart warming....Vitamin L always brings a smile....nice write. Login to Reply Sigrid Ermine Date: 8/12/2020 3:05:00 PM Quick cheer. Thank you, Carol

Hilo Poet Date: 8/11/2020 8:20:00 PM A wealth of well's wishes, indeed--Congrats, Sigrid, your right dosages is worth savoring my friend, Aloha! William Login to Reply Sigrid Ermine Date: 8/12/2020 12:39:00 AM Sweet of you, William. Thanks for the read!

Jenish Somadas Date: 8/9/2020 9:51:00 PM " Vitamin Love" instant grin returns sweetly.. In every delicious dishes my mother cooked, I found this vitamin sprinkled over.. Lovely write.. Login to Reply Sigrid Ermine Date: 8/10/2020 2:10:00 AM Oh, interesting (weird)! . Maybe you didn't like the tabs.! Nicer than sultanas in curry, we wee served, erk.

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/9/2020 7:46:00 PM I just knew it would be Vitamin Love, but I ate this one up anyway. Delicious! Thanks, Gershon Login to Reply Sigrid Ermine Date: 8/9/2020 8:35:00 PM Ha! - You're as clever as an eight year old, Gershon!