Sigrid Ermine Poet Rhyme

Vitamin L

Boosted immunity is an aim for us all
          Like most, I have a rattling compartment 
            Where selection of supplements offer
            Ongoing trip, ship of health embarked 

            My eight year old angel of exuberance 
             Sidles beside me for her citrus share
           When she hears vitamin bottles tinkling
            Chasing crisp vitamin C's sparkling flair

          Sherbert fizz raphsody rests on her palm
          Envelope of appreciation wraps me neatly
" There's lots of of Vitamin L for you," impromptu joke
        " Vitamin Love" instant grin returns sweetly



         10th August 2020

         Submitted in: Any Form, Any Theme 20

         Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Clifford Villalon January 15, 2023 at 4:13 PM Happy New Year!

Jeanne Mcgee August 12, 2020 at 8:44 AM congrats on your win with this Vitamin of Love. Sigrid Ermine August 12, 2020 at 3:04 PM Thank you, Jeanne. I feel there were far more worthy entries, am beginning to understand Brian's preferences.

Carol Mitra August 12, 2020 at 7:05 AM So heart warming....Vitamin L always brings a smile....nice write. Sigrid Ermine August 12, 2020 at 3:05 PM Quick cheer. Thank you, Carol

William Kelii Kekaula August 11, 2020 at 8:20 PM A wealth of well's wishes, indeed--Congrats, Sigrid, your right dosages is worth savoring my friend, Aloha! William Sigrid Ermine August 12, 2020 at 12:39 AM Sweet of you, William. Thanks for the read!

Jenish Somadas August 9, 2020 at 9:51 PM " Vitamin Love" instant grin returns sweetly.. In every delicious dishes my mother cooked, I found this vitamin sprinkled over.. Lovely write.. Sigrid Ermine August 10, 2020 at 2:10 AM Oh, interesting (weird)! . Maybe you didn't like the tabs.! Nicer than sultanas in curry, we wee served, erk.

Gershon Wolf August 9, 2020 at 7:46 PM I just knew it would be Vitamin Love, but I ate this one up anyway. Delicious! Thanks, Gershon Sigrid Ermine August 9, 2020 at 8:35 PM Ha! - You're as clever as an eight year old, Gershon!