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Vitamin L

Boosted immunity is an aim for us all Like most, I have a rattling compartment Where selection of supplements offer Ongoing trip, ship of health embarked My eight year old angel of exuberance Sidles beside me for her citrus share When she hears vitamin bottles tinkling Chasing crisp vitamin C's sparkling flair Sherbert fizz raphsody rests on her palm Envelope of appreciation wraps me neatly " There's lots of of Vitamin L for you," impromptu joke " Vitamin Love" instant grin returns sweetly 10th August 2020 Submitted in: Any Form, Any Theme 20 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/15/2023 4:13:00 PM
Happy New Year!
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Date: 8/12/2020 8:44:00 AM
congrats on your win with this Vitamin of Love.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/12/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne. I feel there were far more worthy entries, am beginning to understand Brian's preferences.
Date: 8/12/2020 7:05:00 AM
So heart warming....Vitamin L always brings a smile....nice write.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/12/2020 3:05:00 PM
Quick cheer. Thank you, Carol
Date: 8/11/2020 8:20:00 PM
A wealth of well's wishes, indeed--Congrats, Sigrid, your right dosages is worth savoring my friend, Aloha! William
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/12/2020 12:39:00 AM
Sweet of you, William. Thanks for the read!
Date: 8/9/2020 9:51:00 PM
" Vitamin Love" instant grin returns sweetly.. In every delicious dishes my mother cooked, I found this vitamin sprinkled over.. Lovely write..
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/10/2020 2:10:00 AM
Oh, interesting (weird)! . Maybe you didn't like the tabs.! Nicer than sultanas in curry, we wee served, erk.
Date: 8/9/2020 7:46:00 PM
I just knew it would be Vitamin Love, but I ate this one up anyway. Delicious! Thanks, Gershon
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/9/2020 8:35:00 PM
Ha! - You're as clever as an eight year old, Gershon!

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