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Visiting Hours

Are there visiting hours in heaven? I'd come visit everyday, I just need to hear you'r voice, Tell me I'll be ok. I would bring a tape recorder, If heaven has no phone. So I could still hear your voice, At times I feel alone. I would give the world, For a chance to see you smile. I'd do whatever I have too, to watch you dance for a little while. If only things were simple, It's getting hard to stay strong. It'd be easier if visiting hours were real, Cause forever just takes too long! By: Melissa Coker

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Date: 7/16/2016 12:29:00 AM
Melissa, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:34:00 PM
Melissa , Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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