Visions Brewing

Flights of fancy, a young man's game
    visions brewing, not one the same...  

  Dawns a slate-gray day, corrective lenses ordered
    horizon's blank ~ anticipation murdered
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Leaving out a sigh…
Wolf Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Aw, thanks, Kim.
Maverick Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 9:16 PM
We no doubt about it you really killed this One Gershon.' there be much ink on your Hands.' As for your mind?? No i'm not going There..! Well not unless the Lord advises...? Dear Lord, consider all the other trials I feel I must now ask.!
Wolf Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 9:11 PM
NOW, I see where the ink comes in on another one of your comments. ~ Senior Momentitis strikes me again
Flood Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Ahh, shattered dreams. I once dreamt that I spent the night with a tall, slim, blue eyed, Swedish, blonde. In the morning, ‘she’ rolled over in bed……… and it was Bjorn Borg. (Okay… it’s an old joke, but I like it!).
Wolf Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Bjorn Borg, my old tennis doubles partner! So, how was she/he/it on a 'different court,' Terry?! Heh-heh.
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