"visions"

Under a star lit sky
Glancing over the hard rock
To see the tree's shadow in the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 19, 2010 at 9:02 AM
Wonderful, Michael! A peaceful image to enjoy the thoughts and visions you need to concentrate on. Loved and enjoyed,..p.d.***** Soup mail
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April 17, 2010 at 7:08 PM
very nice, well written poem!! you took me on another journey tonight. thanks!!
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April 16, 2010 at 4:42 PM
What a magnificent image in your "vision," Michael! Nicely done! Love, Carolyn
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April 16, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Michael~ nice use of imagery. Laura :0)
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