Visions

They looked like four suitcases
the dormitories near campus
as I drove north on I-35 to Ames
going back for sophomore year. 

They glistened under the late
afternoon sun and spoke to me
in a moment of sorrow and joy.

    Come back, come back—
    this is your time and place.

I had stumbled freshman year
suffered a break-up
changed majors and bore
depression, all on a rough
path of discovery to find
who I truly was.

The tires of my mom’s Mustang
sang, and most of my journey
there was already behind me
as I grasped the steering wheel.

    The car moved ahead
    along a fine ribbon
    of concrete.

The vision welcomed me.

I looked past fields
as landscape rested
and past a grove of trees.
I took a deep breath
as I looked at The Towers.

Although summer passed
with a whisper, my year
had just begun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Proxenos Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 10:34 AM
Hi Mike an awesome write about your thoughts, and visions, telling us who you and perhaps who you wish to be, your presence and acknowledgement of self a refreshing honest thread throughout. So enjoyable a read. Hugs Jennifer.!
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March 16, 2026 at 10:33 AM
Hi Mike an awesome write about your thoughts, and visions, telling us who you and perhaps who you wish to be, your presence and acknowledgement of self a refreshing honest thread throughout. So enjoyable a read. Hugs Jennifer.!
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 3:49 PM
I always enjoy your style of writing and the nostalgia you bring to it. I think line one has a typo (life)
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