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Stuck in a deep dark hole beneath the world. I hear foot steps. I see the bottom of people's shoes. I hear laughter, crying, yelling, sighs and gasps. I hear smiles in people's voices. Friendly and warmth. Very comforting. Makes me feel... It makes me feel. Not so bad. I can do it. But something inside of me wants to tell why? Why me ? I am cursed or am I blessed. Am I blessed with a power or a curse? I can't see the world but I can touch and feel and sense the world. I see through touching,smiling and listening. I have a gift. And I can see. I can see clearly. I can't see the corruption. I am happy I can't see with my eyes. Society is dreading and falling apart. Stand still. Close your eyes. And take a deep breath. And breathe. Breathe. What do you see ? A beautiful world. Peaceful. Beautiful and peaceful. Thank you for blessing me. Thank you. God I thank you. By: SSH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2015 12:15:00 AM
Shelai, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:21:00 PM
Shelai:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 3/1/2015 7:04:00 PM
Hi Shelai, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shelai Saroop-Husbands
Date: 3/3/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Skat ! I will be sure to read and get familiar with your pieces!
Date: 3/1/2015 6:07:00 PM
Shelai, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Shelai Saroop-Husbands
Date: 3/3/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome Linda

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