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Vision

Vision! Red blue green the colors we have seen, In different forms, forming illusion. Sometimes in real sometimes in dream, The 3D world but 2D vision. But when I stretch my arms, outta my blanket, And I wake up in the morning, as my eyes are open, Illusions fade, all the dreamy characters evade, When your face is there and I just stare stare stare.... And those free, dangling hairs, When you let them fall, over my face, Those sharp looking eyes gazing me in pairs, Then I could not escape from this magical space. Then the warmth of your hugs, The sound Tik Tok of the clock, Goes outta sync, these moments and logs But I still manage to be there in your lock While I am managing to stay there and I stare stare stare.....

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Date: 12/23/2018 4:54:00 AM
What can I say but...LOVE IT! Great imagery and I love the line "... the 3D world in 2D vision"
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 12/27/2018 4:37:00 AM
Thank you Valerie!!! It's your imagination which rejoiced the lines and thank you for motivating words!
Date: 6/15/2018 1:44:00 AM
Ashok, such a marvelous write.... Please read my new poem ACROSTIC STYLE... Thanks....
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 6/15/2018 10:48:00 AM
I'm just overwhelmed with joy for your motivating words and such a dedicated poem to me on your page... My heart thanks friend! (((Hugs))) cheerio!!!
Date: 4/4/2018 12:05:00 AM
Very well expressed Ashok, Oh to be in love (*sigh*) I look forward to reading more of your work. By the way I'm from Canada! Nice meeting you!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/4/2018 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Kyle!!! i am so glad for your acknowledging. Yeah! nice to meet you too, friend!! and yes your POTD "Sins in the sand" just phenomenal work and in my fav list.
Date: 4/3/2018 3:22:00 AM
Beautiful. Many wishes, Kai
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/3/2018 3:30:00 AM
Greetings for the day!!! Thank you so much Kai!!!
Date: 3/28/2018 6:28:00 AM
Nice vision...well done
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/28/2018 6:30:00 AM
thank you :)

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