Visable

A look in the mirror, there one can see
They are not invisible, not a piece a debris
A look in the mirror, is all it takes
You are a person as real as those aches

The aches one can feel, when another diminishes you
The aches you can not see, when someone truly hurts you
You are you, I am me, we are both visible
Now let them see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Parker - Red Fox Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Superb! The writing is very clean & the flow is gentle.
McBride  Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 10:03 PM
I really enjoyed your work, vert well put together
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