Virus

airborne pathogens
fenced world out of kilter
impulse to Mars brews

















Haiku composed: August 21, 2020

devotionearthhealthmoving onhaiku

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David Holmes

August 28, 2020 at 12:10 PM

Brian - a wonderful Haiku. Congratulations on your win - headed to Mars now - David

Brian Sambourne

August 28, 2020 at 5:23 PM

Hi David Thanks for your good wishes. I believe space missions to Mars are in the planning stage. Such travel remain a futuristic plum. Be well. Brian

Paula Goldsmith

August 28, 2020 at 9:19 AM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Wish we could send this to Mars. Enjoy your win and day...........

Brian Sambourne

August 28, 2020 at 9:25 AM

Hello Paula Many thanks for your kind words. Yes Mars seems a grand escape hatch indeed. Best wishes Brian

D.W. Rodgers

August 28, 2020 at 5:46 AM

Brian, congrats on your win. So much said in 17 words.

Brian Sambourne

August 28, 2020 at 9:29 AM

Hello DW Thank you for your positive response. It is a challenge to say much in the Haiku format. But the Haiku (cheerfully) invites thought. Cheers Brian