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airborne pathogens fenced world out of kilter impulse to Mars brews Haiku composed: August 21, 2020

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David Holmes

Date: 8/28/2020 12:10:00 PM

Brian - a wonderful Haiku. Congratulations on your win - headed to Mars now - David

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/28/2020 5:23:00 PM

Hi David Thanks for your good wishes. I believe space missions to Mars are in the planning stage. Such travel remain a futuristic plum. Be well. Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/28/2020 9:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Wish we could send this to Mars. Enjoy your win and day...........

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/28/2020 9:25:00 AM

Hello Paula Many thanks for your kind words. Yes Mars seems a grand escape hatch indeed. Best wishes Brian

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 8/28/2020 5:46:00 AM

Brian, congrats on your win. So much said in 17 words.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/28/2020 9:29:00 AM

Hello DW Thank you for your positive response. It is a challenge to say much in the Haiku format. But the Haiku (cheerfully) invites thought. Cheers Brian

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/27/2020 12:49:00 PM

Brian, congratulations on your first place win. Wise perception! We want to run from this disease but where!?

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/27/2020 12:51:00 PM

Hi Sam Thank you for your response. I did want to bring a smile to the readers. Few safe havens. Stay well. Best wishes Brian

Gary Radice

Date: 8/27/2020 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations Brian on your 1st place :)

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/27/2020 12:53:00 PM

Hi Gary Kind of you to respond. Messages like yours encourage writing. Cheers Brian