Notes About The Poem
The below write has a 'tounge in cheek' element to it.'
virtue v fault
As a human' and in being aware.? I.' Or you.? In the great
Out-there..yet not as great as the cosmos reaches.? Where
Coal black winds slice frozen; on velocity's outer beaches.' Where
Heats not just hot.? How can words tell.? Yet enough.!! Back to
Earth.' For things thre are not (that swell?) I feel that much
Could be improved.?? And its not just me such is often on
The news.' And there are initiatives by orgs.? Is that now a
Word? With economys like countries.! And workers in herds
TV proclaims of the latest news.' In blasts and mutters and
Of the insane views.?? Of some who want to live live free?
It seems they have' ( dangerous tendancies.?) Like human
Immunity and maskless living? eating organic as in past
Millenia.' And even giving..! Accounts and views!! Of their
Reasons to boot.' Well back to fixing the world up for i
Am sure there's a route.!! There should be a worldwide assembely to make stratagies and plan.? What should be
Done to benifit all hu-mans, and the planet..The environment.'
It would be so grand.!! All is needed is money.?? A real heap
Maybe medicine.?? Yet as allways a plan.?? Its a big job
Yet it must be started.!! To fix the faults that we are all imparted
We must get through..We just need more ( people like i am!! ) full of
Ideas ?? Oh and really great virtues.!
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