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Virtual Reality

Venture into a world created by a computer Immerse yourself into its surreal sphere React to the input of its digital aurora Twist and turn to its commands, is it real Under its spell, you react to its stimuli Abstract concepts unraveled with images cast Limitless possibilities in this parallel reality 6- 25-2024

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Date: 7/16/2024 11:43:00 AM
A ' parallel reality, ' indeed. Sometimes, it can be overwhelming. It's nice being away from ' Virtual Reality, ' every now and then. This is so beautifully written and presented. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/7/2024 2:32:00 PM
Your skillfully written double acrostic conveys a powerful message about the amazing, addictive, and possibly scary world of virtual reality. Janice
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Date: 6/29/2024 8:45:00 AM
an be exiting this computer thing, but I believe we can find better in nature lol, your acrostic is perfect J, loved it
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Date: 6/28/2024 2:21:00 AM
You show great talent with an acrostic at each beginning of a line and another one at the end. Great talent. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/27/2024 3:25:00 PM
intriguing piece made remarkable through your wordplay...I like, joseph!
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Date: 6/26/2024 12:41:00 PM
Great topic, Paul. Well done!
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Date: 6/25/2024 11:34:00 AM
The poem is superb. You put computers in a better light than they deserve. Thank you for your great write.
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