Virtual Reality

 Venture into a world created by a computer
 Immerse yourself into its surreal sphere
 React to the input of its digital aurora
 Twist and turn to its commands, is it real
 Under its spell, you react to its stimuli
 Abstract concepts unraveled with images cast
 Limitless possibilities in this parallel reality

  6- 25-2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Nicole Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 11:43 AM
A ' parallel reality, ' indeed. Sometimes, it can be overwhelming. It's nice being away from ' Virtual Reality, ' every now and then. This is so beautifully written and presented. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy
Canerdy Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 2:32 PM
Your skillfully written double acrostic conveys a powerful message about the amazing, addictive, and possibly scary world of virtual reality. Janice
Rose  Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 8:45 AM
an be exiting this computer thing, but I believe we can find better in nature lol, your acrostic is perfect J, loved it
Buhagiar Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 2:21 AM
You show great talent with an acrostic at each beginning of a line and another one at the end. Great talent. Best for a win.
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 3:25 PM
intriguing piece made remarkable through your wordplay...I like, joseph!
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 12:41 PM
Great topic, Paul. Well done!
Greenhough Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 11:34 AM
The poem is superb. You put computers in a better light than they deserve. Thank you for your great write.
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