Virgo

Virginal composure sits judgment on life
Introspective awareness dispenses advice
Righteous and lawful, all wording concise
Grounded and centred declining all vice
Objective perspective but still very nice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Richards Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Wow..great job!! yes...consise, but you hit the target, and scored on this wonderful Acrostic!! ~ Carrie
Fischer Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Thank you every one. Quite a welcome here. Yes quite correct Christie, do I sense another virgo? Thank you Christopher and Michael, grins. Vikki, me neither, but it rhymed... Purushothaman, ya as Virgos, we do tend to think we know it all, but we end to be polite about it, aren’t we nice? Thanks Michael, nice feedback! It was a fun challenge.
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 9:01 AM
Krow you did an excellent job on this - God Bless, MJ
P. Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 8:21 AM
truly a virgo!! though nice.. i dont know! ~ Arany
Coram Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 7:20 AM
yep pretty much sums it up! a true viro i am, however declining vices was never a strong point of mine! lol x
Degenhardt Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 7:05 AM
The rhyme in this is great while your words so clearly define the Virgo. Excellent! Michael
Higgins Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 6:45 AM
This is done very well..love the rhyming..works well..best wishes in the contest.
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