Virgo

Virginal composure sits judgment on life Introspective awareness dispenses advice Righteous and lawful, all wording concise Grounded and centred declining all vice Objective perspective but still very nice.

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Carrie Richards

Date: 2/11/2009 1:34:00 PM

Wow..great job!! yes...consise, but you hit the target, and scored on this wonderful Acrostic!! ~ Carrie

Krow Fischer

Date: 2/11/2009 11:49:00 AM

Thank you every one. Quite a welcome here. Yes quite correct Christie, do I sense another virgo? Thank you Christopher and Michael, grins. Vikki, me neither, but it rhymed... Purushothaman, ya as Virgos, we do tend to think we know it all, but we end to be polite about it, aren’t we nice? Thanks Michael, nice feedback! It was a fun challenge.

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/11/2009 9:01:00 AM

Krow you did an excellent job on this - God Bless, MJ

Arany P.

Date: 2/11/2009 8:21:00 AM

truly a virgo!! though nice.. i dont know! ~ Arany

Vikki Coram

Date: 2/11/2009 7:20:00 AM

yep pretty much sums it up! a true viro i am, however declining vices was never a strong point of mine! lol x