Viper Poison

Viper poison in the ocean
Viper poison keeps me in motion
Feel the sting on an open wound
So much blood to fill balloon
Viper poison in my brain
Viper poison is no game
Burning sensation
A proclamation
Viper poison here and there
Viper poison everywhere 
Hurts real bad
Drives people mad
Viper poison through the eyes
Viper poison never dies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 2:55 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Steve. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Stay in this poetry soup community and you might develop an immunity. Geez, I'm a poet and don't know it. Have a geat day, Steve. Vince
Adeite Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 10:55 PM
Great rhymes, wonderful flow. Keep the flag flying Steve! Thril us from far distance, you've got time & chance. Adeleke
Freeman Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 7:58 PM
Good rhyme flow. jm
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 3:06 PM
Interesting Rhyme. Sara
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