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Violet Lover

She arrived wearing violet and speaking sooo..... softly Speaking only to my inner self while I was catching sunlight and moonlight before they touched the ground We've learned from the philosiphers how to watch the hands of the clock Surrounded by violet and touching a violet lover I noticed the bright stars one of which is shining for us A galaxy away we'll feel the energy which the universe has left us After its most extraordinary birth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/15/2011 2:38:00 PM
So I take it that violet must be a color of the universe to inspire us to see things more clearly! Violet is close to lavender, which is my favorite color! Glad I found this older one I had not seen yet!
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Date: 11/13/2010 11:46:00 AM
this was such a beautiful piece, very visual and sensual. Not only did you poem give me eyes, but it ignited my nerve endings to feel this poem as well. wonderful work, thank you for your comment. --Madison
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:12:00 AM
Enjoyed the descriptive and expresses write..Violet brings to mind many beautiful sights..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I am glad that I am not the only one who looks more than once at a poem by mistake since you are much younger that makes me feel better..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2010 2:53:00 PM
I ejoyed this write on violet lover the last four lines worded well, Matthew
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Date: 10/23/2010 2:43:00 PM
Very imaginative and creative write Matthew.. luv your title.. and intro lines are so captivating to the reader luv.. enjoyed this weekend...
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Date: 10/22/2010 9:34:00 AM
lovely write...TAH
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