Amy Green Poet Lyric

Violent Skin Art

violent skin art

the back-door window has laughed at misery
broken
deformed
my hands excited the center
a catastrophic introduction
together they depart
the perimeter remains behind and above
a complete separation
sever
abandon direct
we are one
memories are scars
to be fragmented is natural
organization is forced
the back-door window
now paralytic
disarranged
chaos
so mathematical
so perfectly dispersed
waste
garbage
art

Written and performed by my husband Thielus.
A. Green

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Poet Destroyer A September 7, 2013 at 4:56 PM Hi Amy, where you at??? , Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Nice seeing your poem on the front page... always~ Linda :)

Laura Mckenzie September 2, 2013 at 5:22 PM Wonderful poetry! Congrats on your featured poem ! Laura :)

Poet Destroyer A March 26, 2010 at 5:17 PM Tell your husband he is an young artist. Nice thanks

Amy Green March 18, 2010 at 9:04 PM Just returning the favor, my friend.

Billy Thekidster March 17, 2010 at 6:26 AM A talented man your husband is. Has he managed to get himself into show biz? Great Write Amy. Best Wishes Always, Bill (Soup Mail)

Charmaine Chircop March 17, 2010 at 6:12 AM lovely lyrics-awesome-Charma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 17, 2010 at 4:55 AM Amy, thank you for sharing your words with us. And thank you for your recent comments on my work. Smiles, Dane Ann (Your poem reminds me of a recent e-mail. Did you see the hand art forward? It was beautiful. If you want to see it, let me know at: [email protected] and I'll forward it.)

Amy Green March 16, 2010 at 7:43 PM Yeah, my baby is hot!

Carolyn Devonshire March 16, 2010 at 2:53 PM Another great set of lyrics, Amy! I listened to the song he wrote for the other set and think it is very original and innovative in style. And if that's his photo posted on the website, he's a "cutie" as well! Love, Carolyn

Amy Green March 16, 2010 at 10:36 AM Mark, This is actually a song. Lyrics were written to the music. Thanks for your message.

Mark East March 16, 2010 at 10:27 AM A very very interesting poem. The poem itself seems fragmented, but True. This is life unorganized yet real as Art. Great job!!!

Amy Green March 16, 2010 at 10:19 AM Until then, here is some of his other music. Amazing stuff, have a listen. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=41813

Amy Green March 16, 2010 at 10:17 AM He took it off line, but if you wait until later today he will upload it into his music account. I will post the link then.

Amy Green March 16, 2010 at 10:15 AM Let me find the link...

Hyle Chu March 16, 2010 at 10:09 AM "memories are scars / to be fragmented is natural" those are great lines. Self mutilation is art. Where do I hear the music?

Amy Green March 16, 2010 at 9:56 AM Think the words are good? You should hear the music!

Bathsheba Bathsheba March 16, 2010 at 9:47 AM Wow - This is fan ... bloody ... tastic - You can sure knock them out - Thanks for sharing this powerful write -:)