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Viola
Admiring her beauty he was mesmerised Her complete perfection brought tears to his eyes Holding her tenderly in his loving arms Slowly he caressed the magic of her charms. This was the gift he had waited so long for The answer to prayers he had made to the Lord It felt quite spine tingling as his heart took flight Sensing that he’d love her till close of his life. As he held her within a loving caress His fingers traced o'er her with skill and finesse Feeling the joy to the world that she’d bestow Strumming her heart strings music began to flow. They got on well and lived happily in tune She was his amulet to finding fortune Together they made sweet music forever Nothing but death could tear them apart ever. He carried her in a case on his shoulder The musical, adorable viola.
5th October 2021

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Date: 1/21/2022 4:04:00 AM
Exquisite twist to the tale! Enjoyed the read, Belle!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/16/2023 12:55:00 AM
A belated thank you Unseeking Seeker, have only just seen your reply… Belle
Date: 10/6/2021 1:40:00 PM
what a charming poem Belle, beautiful personification, such love for a lovely instrument:-) hugs Jan xx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/6/2021 3:16:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan… Belle :-) Hugs xx
Date: 10/5/2021 12:55:00 AM
You're the best music on the soup. :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/5/2021 1:27:00 AM
Victor you've just made my day very, very happy. Thank you! Hugs, Belle

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