Vines Crossed

somehow and in someway, just once today
                         ends twist, making it so hard to resist
                            this connection with you, it’s true
                    
                                   - vines became tangled -

                             sometime and in someway- today
                                          with only you
                      


~ a little scribble ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 3:42 PM
I like your use of internal rhymes, Nicely penned Brandy...
Nicole Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Hugs, Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Lovely.
Nicole Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Richard. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Green Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Absolutely gorgeous. The thoughts,, the theme, the entire picture created by the poem is beautiful. Nicely done.
Nicole Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you Chris. Your thoughts made me smile. :) Brandy
Coulstock Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:34 PM
It may be just a little scribble to you Brandy but to us who love your poetic work It’s beautiful. Another favourite for me please. June.
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Once again, you lift my heart SYLVIA. Such sweet, encouraging and kind words are whispered from your heart. Thank you my dear friend. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy
Papyrus Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:50 PM
You have a poetic birth mark. I read more your work... And i was smiling! The intelligence being spoken from the soul is mesmerising. Stay in love with what YOU do... That's freedom! Blessings
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Keith, you humble me. Such an incredible thing to say. Words from My Heart express each and every emotion. Yes, wisdom comes with maturity. I have grown in my writing. I love this side of art. Poetry is a part of me. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:15 PM
May your ends twist and your vines become tangled... ;)
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:50 PM
I am blushing. Thank you John. Such a sweet and playful thought. :) Brandy
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Time to make some wine
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:50 PM
Maybe!! :) Thank you Tim. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy
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