Village At Dawn

still break of the day
                 small damp village awakes
                 cold bunny still sleeps



                    January 7, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Makama Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 10:54 AM
This is beautiful. I love this masterpiece. Happy new year friend. Keep the lines blessing.
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January 10, 2020 at 12:15 PM
Funom! I am ever so glad that you are the only poet who saw the beauty in it! I, in all humility do agree with you. I was ready to stop writing. I am quite serious. This is no Shakepearean ode, I get that! So thank you, from the bottom of my heart. With thankfulness, Panagiota
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