Brian Strand Poet Narrative

Vignette-Mind Games

Hadrian,a man of defensive thoughts
Fortified Wallsend to Maryport;
Now fallen down,past its use-by-date
This Roman barrier across our land-
In some folks minds,it still stands!

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Doris Culverhouse June 26, 2010 at 4:20 PM Use by date has me thinking of old milk that made my coffee terribel this am.

Sara Kendrick June 25, 2010 at 2:30 PM Like the line.."Now fallen down, past its use-by-date"...Got a chuckle..Sometimes we hold on to the past when it should have been let go years before...Sara