Vignette-House Party

We went on holiday,this past week
For rest and recreation,we did seek;
Creation,fellowship an abundant grace
Here,martins also found a space,
In the eaves,they with us ,shared this place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 10:20 AM
My vacation is coming in two weeks, so this poem is a pre-poem for me... Thank you for the inspiration in this well written write......:P)
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July 25, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Brian,..what a perfect blessing from Jehovah our God,..I can visualize this serene trip my friend,..intoxicating it is to share with God's creation and I bet the praises were a plenty ! Beautiful poetry Brian ! I and my lil' Noah are on our way in a few minutes to enjoy this wonderful gift from Jehovah ! TY again for treating us to this poem !! james
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:03 AM
Beautiful birds that help rid the earth of too many small insects. Sounds as though you had a lovely trip. Beautiful write. Sara
Kelly Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 2:12 AM
Not Deano's family , no ??.... Hope you had a relaxing hol and enjoyed the "ashes" !!! ....
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