Vigilant Spiders

the house in shambles
                                  dead moon struggles to show up
                                                                      vigilant spiders
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Meade Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 8:42 AM
In the old song, "I don't like spiders and snakes . . . " but I really like your haiku. Lovely my dear friend -- you capture the decay of the world and the ever adapting insect/spider world!! You are the master! 7
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 12:21 AM
tried to create something eerie Ugh what is more frightening than a spider? So scary they are David my friend
Nunez Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 6:36 AM
Now that's a real haiku moment there, Rajat. You captured the picture quite accurately, my friend. You are indeed gifted! Bless you...Kim :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Lovely Kim lovely comments.
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